Hello Bloggers!
These past few weeks in Rimu we have been working on recounts.
This is one of the First recounts that I did so it isn't as good.
From this recount I have learnt:
You can use descriptive language in your recount to make it more interesting as long you don't turn it into a story.
What I found challenging:
Add in emotive words and adding descriptive language.
What's my next step:
To keep using recounts and adding descriptive language, and making sure I have emotive words.
Here is the recount I wrote:
Taking Flight
(based of a short movie)
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