This week we have been working on narrative writing as you might know since I posted my Ice palace post. This is my published narritive that I turned into a slidshow with pictures.
I love reading your writing. You have creative ideas and a good flow. I liked the practical way the girls solved the problem. Are you going to write another story with this theme or characters?
I'm thinking of doing my own writing at home in my free time writing another story that continues this one. Thank you Mrs Spragg I am very happy you like it.
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Hi Mia,
ReplyDeleteI love reading your writing. You have creative ideas and a good flow. I liked the practical way the girls solved the problem. Are you going to write another story with this theme or characters?
:) Mrs Spragg
I'm thinking of doing my own writing at home in my free time writing another story that continues this one. Thank you Mrs Spragg I am very happy you like it.
DeleteMia