Hello to the outside world!
My name is Mia and I am going to show you today!
*calls over shoulder*
Drum roll please!
(drum roll)
(cymbal crash)
The Mousepack!
Here is a visme of what it is!
Enjoy!
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Friday, June 14, 2019
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Hi Mia, Eli here from Grey Main school.
ReplyDeleteI find your invention extremely detailed to the extent of it being on store shelves, I really like your description and attention to possible errors with the Mousepack, I do have one flaw I've seen with it though, the bag looks exactly like a normal bag so other kids might shake it at school causing damage to it and the animal inside. I can understand the concept because I can relate to longing for my pets while at school.
Hi Eli! As you know my name is Mia. Thank you so much for your time to comment on my blog, I really appreciate it. I can see why you have noticed this, and it is mostly my fault for not actually putting the reason and where it is mostly suitable for. Me and my friend pretty much made this just to take it with you to places and we weren't really thinking about it much being a school thing.
DeleteThank you again!
Mia