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Wednesday, July 26, 2017

My holiday



I wrote a recount on my holiday. I have added each part on each slide. Enjoy!
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  1. AnonymousJuly 27, 2017 at 9:22 AM

    This is really cool the way you presented your holiday. Next time I think you should add some more colour otherwise I thought you did really good writing your holiday story. Do wish it was still the holidays? I wish it still was. Really looking forward to reading more of your post.
    Bree
    Yaldhurst model school

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    1. AnonymousAugust 8, 2017 at 3:52 PM

      Thanks for the comment Bree, well I don't know? hafley.

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    2. AnonymousAugust 8, 2017 at 3:53 PM

      I meant like hafley do hafley don't like holidays.

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