I am as ….
Slow as a tortoise
Small as a mouse
Happy as a lark
Cold as a icicle
Hot as a fire
Loud as a trumpet
Quiet as a ninja
Gentle as a baby
Brave as a hunter
Tame as a dog
Wild as a wolf
Lazy as a cat
Busy as a bee
Put it all together and you’ve got Mia!
What a superb set of similes Mia. I think you have described yourself very imaginatively but I do not think you are 'lazy as a cat.' do you have even more characteristics that you have not written about?
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
Hi there, my name is Miro and I am a student in room five at Awahono School. I really like your simile poem. It made me think of my cat that is wild but it comes around for rubs and food. Have you thought about making the writing flasher by making it a different font?
ReplyDeleteHi Mia, it's Miro, your simile poem looks great on your blog. I liked how you did patterns with your highlights. One thing that you could do to make it even better is highlight your work differently like if it was an icicle you could make it blue and if it was fire you could make it red. How long did it take you to type out your simile poem? From Miro your Awahono School blog buddy.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the Ideas Miro. Also It took me about 20 minutes to do it.
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