Hello Mia my name is Lauren from St. Bernadette's school. I think that your ''How to be a superhero'' was really cool. I especially like slide 10 about making a name. Maybe next time you could use more colour but over all it was awesome. What gave you the idea to do a slideshow about how to be a superhero that was very imaginative. I will definitely be trying to make a superhero!
Thank you for the comment Lauren, it wasn't actually my idea because we had a subject about superheros that the year 5 and 6 did. Next time maybe if I do a slide I will add more color.
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Hello Mia my name is Lauren from St. Bernadette's school. I think that your ''How to be a superhero'' was really cool. I especially like slide 10 about making a name. Maybe next time you could use more colour but over all it was awesome.
ReplyDeleteWhat gave you the idea to do a slideshow about how to be a superhero that was very imaginative. I will definitely be trying to make a superhero!
Thank you for the comment Lauren, it wasn't actually my idea because we had a subject about superheros that the year 5 and 6 did. Next time maybe if I do a slide I will add more color.
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