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Friday, April 13, 2018

The Enchanted staff...

Hello there bloggers! Today I am posting a blog post about my story the Enchanted staff, this is the first Chapter of my story, my Chapter's are quiet short, I will try to publish a chapter every couple of days if you are interested in the story. Here is the first part.

The Enchanted Staff

Chapter one
The Meteor


It all started with a group of Five friends, Parwin, Jedi, Mia, Mika, and Nikita. That day it was the end of school and they we're playing handball. Once everyone was gone, Mika was the only one left standing there in the quiet courtyard. Suddenly, there was a glow, then an explosive, bang in the fields. Mika quickly covered her eyes from all the dust and smoke. As soon it was finished, there was a big crater left behind. Wondering what it was Mika ran towards it. Then what appeared was Hana, she asked Mika “What was that big boom?!” While waving her arms in the air. “I don’t know?” said Mika, and started to run towards it again.

In the crater was a big huge fiery rock. Mika touched the rock slowly, and it disintegrated. What was left was a crystal with a glowing stick like thing inside. Hana ran towards the meteor, whoosh! Past Mika, and tried to lift the crystal, “Hana you’re not that strong!” Said Mika, so Hana grabbed a stick and hit once, nothing happens, Hana hit it twice, nothing happened. So Hana hit it multiple times, even then nothing happened. Mika watched Hana go back inside and got another stick, this time it was bigger though. Hana lifted the stick high in the air and swung it down with a big crash! Somehow Hana had broken it. But there was some negatives too. Whatever was inside was slightly bended.

“Uh…” Mika stood there confused, “Did the banana kingdom give me the power to break it!” Said Hana, let me remind you she is crazy about bananas. “Hana I don’t think there’s such thing as a “Banana Kingdom” in this world” Said Mika, “Well it’s real in my imagination!” Said Hana. Mika picked up the staff and put in quickly in her bag, and then they left school. But Someone was looking over them “Mhua hahaha!”

2 comments:

  1. Thank you for sharing the beginning of your story. You are correct - it is quite short. I am intrigued by the 'banana kingdom.' Should I be scared that 'someone is looking over them?'

    Please be aware that some of your text is slipping off the white background and becomes hard to read.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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    1. Well I guess it was a free writing so I did just write lot's, but I think I should check it again.

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