This is my second chapter of the Enchanted Staff...
Chapter two
The reval
While Hana was looking at the stick, Mika was clicking on her computer away and telling the rest of her friends about it. Mia had typed You’ve got to be kidding Mika! Mika replied Oh here’s a photo! Beep! Mika clicked the button to send it to Mia. ok typed Mia, forget what I said before. Mika shared it with all of them.
The next day school was canceled because of the big meteor. So Mika decided that she and her friends we're go on an adventure to see where the staff came from, what it can do, and pretty much everything about it. We all met up at Mika’s house, and checked out the staff. The staff was glowing at the ruby on the top, the gold shimmers in the darkness.
Suddenly, a ball of light came out of the staff, and it shaped itself into an arrow pointing to the north of Canterbury. “That was unexpected!” Said Jedi, Mia quickly took the staff, “I got it I got it! The staff is pointing to where we have to go!” Mia screamed, So we raced out the door, out to the city. We looked to see where to go and where it was telling us to go. Suddenly Mia slipped and barley fell into a hole, but Mika caught her in time. “That was close” Said Nikita, and we continued. It was like as someone was trying to stop them.
They stopped at the museum, and the staff was telling us to go in. But the door was locked, we pushed as hard as we can but it didn’t budge. The staff glowed and magically it opened. We stepped inside tried to hide the staff, as it told us where to go. We followed it until it said to go inside the ancient egypt area. “I’m not going in there!” Said Mia “Me neither” said Mika. “You guys can stay here if you want” said Nikita “But give us the staff” said Parwin. So the three of them left Mia and Mika behind and stepped inside. Mia and Mika walked back to the house, happily, but a dark shadow mouthed them and took them away
I love your imagination. I am enjoying going on this journey with your characters. I would love to know more about your characters. What is motivating them to follow the staff's arrow? Do they all share the same reasons for being on the journey?
ReplyDeletei look forward to your next blog post.
Well as you have read the meteor has come from the sky so, I thought, it has to be interesting!
DeleteHi Mia,
ReplyDeleteI love how the story is written, but why did you not bring Hana to the Adventure?
This reminds me of me writing the first chapter of my story.
How did the staff activate? How did the staff get into space?
By Mika